Second attempt in photoshop

Here is my second photoshop attempt for my cyborg brief. As you can see it is a lot more simpler now. I have also used a lot more technique skills in photoshop such as the smoothing tool and the burning tool.

I feel I have definatley shown what my new concept is about, however I would like to use even more technique skills as I feel I am getting in to this photoshop a lot more. Also I would like to incorporate some of my own images to make my work feel more like my own.